They hurt me? Don't worry, I know how to defend and fight for myself. Besides, it was your hateful words that hurt me more.

Aldertalon to Webpaw on his reaction after the SkyClan duel

Aldertalon is a tall, lean, caramel brown she-cat with tabby patterns and wide orange eyes. She has two scars over her right eye, an a heavily scarred left leg. She currently resides in ShadowClan as it's deputy.



Aldertalon has naturally lean features, strikingly similar to her father. Her eyes are bright and wide. Her fur has a smooth texture, and lingers right between being short and long- a nice medium. She has two scars over her right eye, caused by a hawk. This was a contributor as for how she got the suffix -talon. Her leg wounds ended up scarring terribly after her duel with Blacknut of SkyClan, and so remain there.

Heritage: Moggy x Burmese x LaPerm


  • Cream color
  • Mackerel tabby
  • 25% White spotting
  • Mink
  • Medium-length fur
  • Medium build
  • Large size
  • Orange
  • No known mutations/carried risks


Strength: 4
Stamina: 4
Constitution: 5
Speed: 9
Agility: 10
Wit: 7
Overall Rating: 39/50

Voice: Aldertalon's voice is generally comes off as smooth and silvery.

Scent: Pine trees.


  •  +  Empathetic - Aldertalon finds it easy to relate to others, often wanting to help anyone in any situation.
  •  +  Optimistic - Aldertalon is often optimistic, looking to the good side of things rather than the bad. She likes to think that the future is always a good thing.
  •  ±  Extroverted - Aldertalon is generally friendly, and loves to talk with others. She makes an effort to make herself more "out there".
  •  ±  Sarcastic - Aldertalon loves to mess around with a sarcastic tone, especially towards her closest friends.
  •    Unaware - Aldertalon acts as if she's unaware of what goes on around her. She doesn't pay much attention to anything that doesn't interest he and tends to ignore things she doesn't want acknowledged.
  •    Lazy - To put it simply, Aldertalon would rather sleep in her den instead of going out and training. She loves to relax and be comfortable, though it's obviously a bit too much.

Likes & Dislikes


  • Thing


  • Thing


  • Taking back the Twoleg Tree
  • Aldertalon swears revenge on SkyClan, and is hellbent on taking back the Twoleg Tree that she caused ShadowClan to lose during a fight.
  • Successfully Training an Apprentice
  • Aldertalon wants to prove to her apprentice that she's the best mentor out there and successfully pass down her skills to him.


  • Fear
  • Description of Fear



Clan: (???)
Cats Involved: Unknown
Age Range: 0-6 moons

  • Aldertalon's kithood is unknown. She has never told about it.

Clan: ShadowClan
Cats Involved: Coalstar
Age Range: ??-?? moons

  • Aldertalon has never said much about her apprenticeship either, other than that she was trained by Coalstar, formerly Coalblaze.

Clan: ShadowClan
Cats Involved: Unknown
Age Range: ??-?? moons

  • Aldertalon has never detailed much of her warriorhood. She finds it uninteresting.

Clan: ShadowClan
Cats Involved: Various
Age Range: ??-?? moons

  • Coalstar appoints Aldertalon as her next deputy. Aldertalon is overjoyed, and promises to never disappoint Coalstar.



HR WindClan Logo WC Unknown Tom
HR WindClan Logo WC Unknown She-cat
HR SkyClan Logo SKC Skyblaze
HR SkyClan Logo SKC Valleywind
HR SkyClan Logo SKC Heathertail
HR WindClan Logo WC Stonestripe
HR WindClan Logo WC Windwatcher
HR Kittypet Logo KYP Honey
HR SkyClan Logo SKC Bramblethorn
HR ShadowClan Logo SHC Ambergaze
HR ThunderClan Logo TC Jackalheart
HR SkyClan Logo SKC Stormheart
HR ShadowClan Logo SHC Stagleap
HR ShadowClan Logo SHC Mistyflame
HR ShadowClan Logo SHC Tigerstripe
HR Kittypet Logo KYP Tucker
HR ShadowClan Logo SHC Vipertongue
HR WindClan Logo WC Cottonmouth
HR ShadowClan Logo SHC Aldertalon
HR ShadowClan Logo SHC Hawkbright
HR ShadowClan Logo SHC Blazepaw

    = Male

    = Female

    = Gender Unknown


= Acquaintance | ⦁⦁ = Friend | ⦁⦁⦁ = Best friend

= Blood relative | ⦁⦁ = Like family | ⦁⦁⦁ = Inseparable

= Respects as equal | ⦁⦁ = Looks up to | ⦁⦁⦁ = Idolizes

= Crush | ⦁⦁ = Fling/Potential mate | ⦁⦁⦁ = Mate

= Uneasy around | ⦁⦁ = Nervous around | ⦁⦁⦁ = Induces anxiety

= Competitor | ⦁⦁ = Rival | ⦁⦁⦁ = Archnemesis

= Annoyed by | ⦁⦁ = Dislikes | ⦁⦁⦁ = Hates


Thoughts (with cited experiences, as applicable).

"We fought them without reason of our own. I hold no grudges against them."

"They're a little weird, but they're probably fine."

Stagstar/Rating(s)/Leader/Knows of/20%
Aldertalon simply shrugs.

"My home.. how can I not love it? It's the best place to be in the whole entire forest!"

Coalstar/⦁⦁⦁⦁⦁⦁⦁/Leader/Great friend and mentor figure/100%
"She's sooo annoying, always messing up my fur and telling me to get off my lazy ass!"
Aldertalon grins, then immidiately starts laughing; of course she enjoys her previous mentor's company.
"He's impatient, buh oh well. He's still my one and only apprentice!"
Aldertalon has a proud grin on her face.
"He liked the feathers.. hehe.."
Aldertalon grins and blushes, averting her gaze from you.
Ashenbrook//Warrior/Knows Of/20%
"You think you're oh so great for hating me for losing a battle, even though nobody wins every battle. Stuck up, maybe I'll act the same way when you lose a difficult battle."
Aldertalon glares and rolls her eyes.

"They dragged us into their problems, which caused us terrible injury in the end. I don't wanna see these lazy asses ever again, solve your own stupid problems."

Nectarstar/Rating(s)/Leader/Knows of/10%
"You don't deserve Coalstar. Go swoon over that dumb SkyClan leader instead or something."

"I hate you. I can't wait to see your pathetic clan fall apart."

Drizzlestar/Leader/Has talked to/10%
"Hmph. You're not as bad as I thought, but that still doesn't excuse your dumb clan."
Aldertalon scoffs, rolling her eyes.
Aldertalon's glare is cold and narrowed down to slits.

"Outside the clans.. like, rogues and stuff? I've never really met any."


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